We three
It snuck up on me.
Madness.
Hemming my shadow.
Chunnering,
a devil on my shoulder,
whispering insanity.
Demented and Tormented
became my friends
and together we ricochet.
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It snuck up on me
- Madness
Hemming my shadow
- Chunnering
A devil on my shoulder
- whispering
Together we ricochet
Hi Kathryn, love the economy and choice of words in this. Above is an alternative take, notbetterjust different and something to think about maybe? Win x
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Ann Foxglove
Fri 30th Apr 2010 06:09
Hi Kathryn - another good one. I like Win's take on it too. But with his, I guess you'd have to change the title as I assume the three are demented and tormented plus the poet. x