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The Birthday Comb

She tips her age into his yawning hands, tracing the mother tide.

Her eyes are bites, and with her smile, her smash of glass in a feral air,

she leaps forward:

            “Name me in your heart.”

 

His shoulders sigh, fanning twilight thin, and stretch in the arch

of a velvet coat, and with a voice of milk and ice, he complies;

            “You leap into me like a greying river.”

 

Her throat cuts out into the night, wounding the porcelain,

and, with her lonely study probing the sand, reaching for a curtain

to clothe, she tilts her cheek childish once more:

            “Name me in your heart?”

 

He sweeps her feet and tastes the walk, and shirks the woe

wide, and with a voice like crystals drowning, he beguiles:

            “Your heart is in my heart.”

 

She, satisfied, drags the comb down once more, and wills the years blind.

 

Her dust is a kiss and a beauty

in the knowing pull of the tide.

           

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winston plowes

Fri 30th Apr 2010 00:52

Hmm... you are at it gain with your brilliance :-)

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Cynthia Buell Thomas

Thu 29th Apr 2010 17:24

Brilliant. Real poets see and hear and feel and understand and share so much, so aptly. Let the world beware.

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Ann Foxglove

Tue 27th Apr 2010 16:39

Really beautiful Marianne. "Name me in your heart" such a great line. Is it a plea, an instruction, an order? I wonder!

Rachel Bond

Tue 27th Apr 2010 14:37

oh my marianne...sharp intakes of breath later..this is perfect,

He sweeps her feet and tastes the walk, and shirks the woe wide, and with a voice like crystals drowning, he beguiles:
"Your heart is my heart."

and after all that talk of greying rivers..

only women write the true romances...

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