Hi there i'm an amateur poet , i'v been writing for a while now and would love some feedbacks so i can improve since i believe there's always room to improvement (:
Land of sacred ruins:- Still-the rhythm of hurricanes Say- below seas shine rich pearls Do you see? Do you see? Do you see?! Come with, the edge of oceans- lay a land Do you hear the wail of souls? Do you? Those were the wise once, but greed fester their hearts Now they whine and fiddle with lives No one hear them, but do you? Listen - they whisper claims in sleep Those nightmares are them Beware! Beware! Allow nightmares into days You’ll spend days in the land of scared ruins - (Khione)
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Endless As The Sea (11/10/2021)
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