Biography
I am new to writing and am keen to perform. I am interested in how people perceive my work so please let me know
Samples
MissTaken The lady wants, desires, frustrates Nobody is home, and she is all alone Polite deceit is all she receives The many, the masses, gravitate and coalesce How thoughtful they are to have uniform thought. No room for more...insight that is. For her, no space, can't even acquiesce She longs to belong Please let me join your throng I can please with ease, am I so uncomfortable But she is Misstaken and never more.
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Comments
Hello mystery lady. Thanks for your comments on my miserable tract 'drenched'. You must have been the veiled lady supping bottled lager at that gig in Bury leaning on the champion poker player. You move in mysterious ways.
I like the second verse of Misstaken.
Keep on waxing.
John
<Deleted User> (7075)
Tue 22nd Dec 2009 11:23
Welcome to WOL looking forward to more material Goth chick. Winston
I hope that you will get plenty of constructive criticism for your work here. Welcome to WOL
Hi Ms Goth! This poem is very complex, I feel, and almost reads like a message from you, hoping to belong on this site! Do write us some more, and welcome! Love coalesce and acquiece!
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Goth Chick
Tue 22nd Dec 2009 13:58
Ann
Thanks for your comments, I did laugh a little when submitting this piece here. But don't worry; I'm sure insight and thoughtfulness reside here in abundance.