Your honest raw thoughts and opinions please! Ty!

Should it rhyme better? Too long? Etc etc

https://www.writeoutloud.net/public/blogentry.php?blogentryid=85072

Thank you!! ✌❤♊☯
Fri, 14 Dec 2018 03:05 pm
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I think it's good and one for a slam perhaps, some spelling errors which don't count when they are read.
Fri, 4 Jan 2019 12:49 pm
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