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Version: 4
Beauty
This worldis so beautiful
that when I look around
I am mesmerised.
God blessed us
by creating this beauty.
It is worth living for.
--
I thought I would try a rewrite in my own style, but could not face changing the original so drastically:
Mesmerised gazing
on God-blessed beauty
reminds why life
is worth the living.
Julian Jordon
Version: 3
Beauty
This worldis so beautiful
that when I look around
I am mesmerised.
God blessed us
by creating this beauty.
It is worth living for.
I thought I would try a rewrite in my own style, but could not face changing the original so drastically:
Mesmerised gazing
on God-blessed beauty
reminds why life
is worth the living.