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Asher Jade

Sat 30th Jun 2018 01:20

Hey Don,
Thanks for your comment, but that's not what it was about. I was not touching "the thought". No such thing. If you read the whole poem, please think and try to understand. And if not, well, I wish I could tell you what it means.?

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Don Matthews

Sat 16th Jun 2018 04:32

Piper. You devil you. Saying you use vulgar language and graphic imagery led me thirsting for some spicy stuff. He won't know you touched something pleasurable. OK what's coming next thought I. The mind boggles! Then you pulled the rug out from under me in the second verse. It was the thought you were touching. Expertly crafted Piper.

Pleased to make your acquaintance

Don ?

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Hasmukh Mehta

Thu 31st May 2018 05:15

Nice poem sample

Personal contact

Thursday, 31st may .2018

He doesn't know
when I blow
my whistle for the invite
but he gets delighted

I free the thought
to go near and don't get caught
as I want to remain unknown
till he tries to own me

He is real and dashing personality
I know of him clearly
I have some fascinations
and really wants to have the close relation

he may know only when
I push him sudden
to the wall of unseen love
then only he will believe

yes, I believe in personal contact
to know more about his acts
and get closer to the consolidation
such is my way of building the relation

Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta

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