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Sun 27th Jul 2008 14:25
Just enjoyed your poem, Jennie.
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Mon 26th May 2008 15:47
Hi, apologies for not replying sooner, i've not been on here for a while,,,, thank you for your comments, they are very much appreciated, i'm pleased you liked my writing, thanks again,,, Jennie
Tomás Ó Cárthaigh
Mon 26th May 2008 15:28
We all seek the one for life...
Mon 17th Dec 2007 22:01
This is a great poem, Jennie.
It somehow seems really apt for this time of the year - a time when we all feel the need to be loved.
The rhyming lines are good...
But the other lines are the hub of the poem:
I show the world an outside strength
Inside i cry - who am i ?
I want to look in another's eyes
And share with him my smile
Feel arms around me holding me close
Someone to want me for who i am
Who will bring forth a smile
That reaches into my eyes ....
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