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David Franks

Sun 27th Jul 2008 14:25

Just enjoyed your poem, Jennie.

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Mon 26th May 2008 15:47

Hi, apologies for not replying sooner, i've not been on here for a while,,,, thank you for your comments, they are very much appreciated, i'm pleased you liked my writing, thanks again,,, Jennie

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Tomás Ó Cárthaigh

Mon 26th May 2008 15:28

We all seek the one for life...

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Kevin Connolly

Mon 17th Dec 2007 22:01

This is a great poem, Jennie.
It somehow seems really apt for this time of the year - a time when we all feel the need to be loved.
The rhyming lines are good...

sounds/ ground
see/ me
own/ alone
plan/ man

But the other lines are the hub of the poem:

I show the world an outside strength
Inside i cry - who am i ?
I want to look in another's eyes
And share with him my smile
Feel arms around me holding me close
Someone to want me for who i am
Who will bring forth a smile
That reaches into my eyes ....

Excellent.

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