Phil, this is very nice!
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Sat 29th Dec 2007 03:26
Phil- This entire poem is really great you have placed a lot of metamorphosis in this piece and I loved the comparison of a single naked letter
to a white virgin page.-- this is so creative and lovely.
"A single letter is as naked and vulnerable as the virgin white page
The thrust of sentiment comes from the streams that forge the channel
Could it be the start of lover’s dreams to slip letters between sheets?"
Thank you for another great read!
Happy New Year 2008!!
Zuzanna Musial
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Francine
Sun 5th Apr 2009 19:34
This is so lovely... The imagery that this poem evokes is beautiful...
I can relate to this so well...
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