Dear Ray, thank you for the feedback. My writing is usually very personal to me, however it felt right to share my feelings this time round and I will be sharing a few more of my poems going forward.

It's good to hear what others think of my writing, and you are right this specific poem does have a very personal side to it.

Thank you again

Regards Neill

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Original item by Neill Barnard

A very personal heartfelt poem and I think it has a lovely resonance , a hard and final quality that got my attention . Some experiences are so real when put into words like these.

Ray

Comment is about The Passing of love (blog)

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