thanks guys! yes, the layout was an attempt at a cliff face, outcrop type thing. thanks for the comments as ever!

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Very good poem, in its diction, sound, superb imagery and tone.

Is the layout supposed to depict a taut rope dropping straight down the cliff face, and the irregular, related lines the swinging out and in over the cliff irregularities? I have no clue. Would love to know.

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I love the skeletal wisp of scurvy grass. Fab Stu

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I look forward to reading your stuff, Stu. This petite offering is a thrill - small like the object it lovingly describes and hence all in proportion. A great format too. Leering moonlight is an added bonus.

Ray.

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