Nicely put together Marie-Anne.
I would change the word blanket in V2 to give yourself more options to rhyme with (shroud perhaps etc).
Well done and good to see you here.
Graham
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Nicely put together Marie-Anne.
I would change the word blanket in V2 to give yourself more options to rhyme with (shroud perhaps etc).
Well done and good to see you here.
Graham
Comment is about Silence (blog)
Original item by Marie-Anne
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Marie-Anne Marten
Wed 7th Jan 2015 22:07
Thank you for your comments Graham. I have made small changes to the poem, and I think it reads much better; the rhyme was also a bit "twee" in V4 - but better now :-)
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