...and you Laura are the mistress to fortune, or something, anyway ta la! ;)

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You are the master of such teasery though Tommy - it's something you excel at. The reader never ever gets the whole story - and I for one love that.

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Hi Natalie, ta for your comment here. I like the idea of a lack of build up, enter mid-scene, leave mid-scene. I was told by my English tutor that that was not real literature(some years ago) and that put me off. Natalie, I have a log-book of such including this ''Hockey'' excerpt. You have only to ask. tommy 11656

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Hi Winston ta for your comment. I could argue that the simpler the dialogue the easier to understand and the more powerful your message will resound: ''Eat less move more'' ;) tommy

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I have never written a play but You are showing us how powerful a simple dialogue can be here Tommy. Not so simple to do as well as this though. x

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