<Deleted User> (5646)
Sun 18th Jan 2009 13:19
Hi Anthony,
the first poem made me feel so sad it brought tears to my eyes. Yet it is beautifully written.
The second one 'weather report,' was also quite good and very grey, except for the footprints in the sand of me. Splendid visionary senses.
Enjoyed these very much. Thankyou for sharing them with us.
Janet.xx
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Perhaps I didn't phrase that in quite the right way - I meant 'bleak' in a good way! - not a negative. :-)
Have you ever read any Anne Tyler? In 'A Patchwork Planet' she wrote (paraphrasing here!) that every relationship is strained, but after 40 or 50 years - the other sort of becomes the right person. Or something along those lines.
Your poem reminded me of that anyway.
Thanks for your remarks re my 'Attitude'! lol
Cx
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Both of these are excellent Anthony, but I particularly liked 'A Hearty Breakfast' - very well written - it did, however, leave me feeling a little bit bleak!
Cx
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<Deleted User> (24803)
Sat 18th Jul 2020 07:26
So like those old non pandemic days. I guess we must be missing those good old days.
It's the irony, a history being written.
How ungrateful can humans be, now we realize in pandemic days.
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