My goodness, Mate, what a deep one you are, blessed with the power of thinking profoundly, relating exponentially, expressing clearly and influencing greatly. I love the killing simplicity of the title, just 'Stars'. The final encapsulating line 'Under the scrutiny of the stars' is a brilliant completion of the thought-circle. This poem is loaded with your seeking mind. How old did you say you were?
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Cynthia Buell Thomas
Sun 25th Jul 2010 10:56
My goodness, Mate, what a deep one you are, blessed with the power of thinking profoundly, relating exponentially, expressing clearly and influencing greatly. I love the killing simplicity of the title, just 'Stars'. The final encapsulating line 'Under the scrutiny of the stars' is a brilliant completion of the thought-circle. This poem is loaded with your seeking mind. How old did you say you were?
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