p.s. I find the things you mull over fascinating, Cynthia - you are definitely a lady to lunch with...

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I love the ideas behind this. I can identify with most of it and the bits I can't, I can imagine.

How often do I start a poem all fired up with a couple of lines and ideas. When I try to put flesh on the bones, give it structure, I seem to lose that fire and the poem doesn't get finished or changes shape all together.

I've often thought that love is best expressed by actions not words - it doesn't seem to stop us wanting to hear and express it though...

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Really good, Shelley Ann. I enjoyed every aspect of this, from the concept to the varied construction in expressing it. What a brave idea to tackle; it is so ephemeral, almost defying concrete explanation.
Mind you, I think the power of sex IS the power of soul. I was mulling over this only yesterday.

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