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This journey will be long and unfulfilling, do not be fooled For what you seek will bring such magnificent distress and surely be your end Many of souls have fallen to this illusion, failing to see beyond such brilliant deception Do not despair in your desires of the river you once bathed in as that river no longer exists. Do not fret, your woes lie not of what that river is now Stay steady, be not lead astray for your patience in this search is a burden you carry alone Prepare now for the new sun, it fast approaches and there is still much work to do In the days light, gather your food, make your shelter, do not neglect your securities.
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