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"Dan Smith"

Updated: Sat, 20 May 2017 12:32 pm

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I'm a newb to poetry. Go easy on me, I'm just looking for guidance and constructive criticism!!!


Inside my own mind I'm locked up, frozen, serving time. A hollow shell of a man, From problems I ran, Lost on the sea aboard a raft called life. A lost dog in the rain, I'm a creature let loose from my chain, I see no difference between wrong or right. Because it's always for me, I feel tangled in tragedy, Eyes wide shut that never will see.

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