I am a very amateur poet just wanting to get some feed back on my work. Any comments would be much appreciated.
It’s not rain Fire erupts furiously A roar of thunderous anger Followed by a rush of garishly smoke A message released in desperation Begging for acknowledgement Only to dissipate To vanish To float past heaven As the sounds and smells become part of the world It is exposed Seen to death The final act A lone and solemn drop Emerges Subtly slipping past sight Falling to a blackened earth Falling throughout an illogical world Fire, smoke, pain and suffering And a single drop Of water
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