Need feedback!First poem in years!


Every now and then,
In a moment of sweet nostalgia,
I remember a life-once mine.
All else fades.
I bask in memories of joy I once felt,
Joy I´ve not known since.
Memories of love, laughter, and pain.
Memories of naïve hope for the future.
Memories of people I loved, people I´ve since lost.
Memories of those I´d give anything to see.
Yet my life I regret not.
See had I lived the life I wanted,
A whole odyssey I would have missed.
Sun, 24 Jun 2018 01:11 am
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<Deleted User> (19708)

Very nice. You still have the touch

Mon, 25 Jun 2018 01:06 am
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I enjoyed it .......dont put the pen down, keep writing
Wed, 4 Jul 2018 05:13 pm
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