Opinions please?

On the periphery of that neon grin you own,
I saw a tear balanced there.
Poised to fall amongst your lies of
I'm fine,life is great etc etc.
You keep your sadness confined in a cardboard box,
mementos of your madness wrapped neatly in tinfoil.
Let it loose,let it blossom and unfold.
A pungent lily searching for the light.
Mon, 29 May 2017 10:14 pm
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Excellent and very moving.
Mon, 18 Sep 2017 04:38 pm
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Hi
There are some lines I love:
"I saw a tear balanced there." & You keep your sadness confined in a cardboard box, mementos of your madness wrapped neatly in tinfoil
9 days ago
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