d.knape

Tue 13th Nov 2018 17:47

I dunno
Beno
your poetry
bueno
rhymes play
like a piano
while mine
are all
guano.

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Becky Who

Tue 13th Nov 2018 14:54

Hi Beno, thank you for your kind comments to my poem "Leaving Home". I don't think our paths have previously crossed on WOL (I've only been a member since summer), I've been enjoying some of your poems and I look forward to reading more. You have such a poetic, crafted style, with beautifully-balanced phrases and intricate rhymes that make paper sing (or in this case, a screen). I look forward to exchanging further with you.

Best regards
Becky Who

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kJ Walker

Tue 5th Dec 2017 21:03

Hi Beno. Just re-read all your postings (for the umpteenth time now). I'm really enjoying all your stuff.
You say that you are new to poetry, but already you have the technical ability of someone with many years experience.
To me your "Treasure Island" poem is the one that really stands out. It really floated my boat.

Cheers Kevin

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Cynthia Buell Thomas

Wed 29th Nov 2017 11:33

Welcome to WOL, Beno. You have a fine feel for words and the drama of using them well. You will enjoy this site. Really nice photo too.

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Wolfgar Miere

Thu 23rd Nov 2017 13:26

Hi Beno, good luck in your struggles regarding Downham...I'm sure it will be worth it.

David.

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