Thank you Martin. I appreciate the feed back :)

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This is indeed a beautiful poem. I love its pace the way it twists, curls and finds its own way.
' I breathe in the same air as do my neighbours breathe out their lies'

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Thank you.

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It dines with hours, it sleeps with time.

It joins a poem that I is in control

I like this line so much I see no reason for I to stay alone.

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