sometimes. In the poem the first expect should be crossed out but still there but couldn't get that to happen in that text box
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otlastark
Wed 9th Jan 2013 21:52
I loved this short poem. Although I couldn't really read trhough it without replacing first "Accept" by "Except". It made more sense to me this way.
Sometimes when I write a poem, I write down one word, but latter I realise I meant a different word with similar sonority and that different word makes perfect sense anf fits forever.. Does it happen to you?
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Ann Foxglove
Mon 14th Jan 2013 13:58
Hi - and a very warm welcome to WOL. Hope you enjoy the site :)
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