thanks mate for what you said
it all matters and is important
much love
happy new year
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Kenneth Eaton-Dykes
Thu 5th Jan 2012 13:31
Hi N-f. After watching Wallander I think Sweden
would be the perfect place to confirm ones euthanasic, intentions.
Ken.
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thanks for your comments mike, i will write you a poem when i feel the inspiration.
keep writing x
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cheers Mike- I am in deep self-consultation :o)
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<Deleted User> (6895)
Mon 19th Dec 2011 00:37
Mike-have sent you email and tried to connect
with you on chat but to no avail.No probs,hope the email helps.Await a reply when it suits you
Our best to you
Patricia and Stef.xx
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I totally understand about you not wanting to cut your poem down. When something is deeply meaningful to you, it's a hard thing to do. I've tried to do the same in the past, when I've been trying to squeeze things into 3 minutes for a slam. I found the essence of what I was saying went.
I'm glad you explained who Williams was. I thought he must be some famous political or military figure and didn't want to show my ignorance by asking :)
I hope you have a peaceful Christmas Mike.
Isobel x
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Yes mate thanks for your comment
i use to live near hyde road n.reddish
i live near brooks bar at the moment
the poem was about the weight of the readers comments , glad you liked it
i need to write
i think as writer's we should be careing people
thanks for the support
much welcomed
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Michael
Thanks for such high praise.
The Other’s Worlds
by J. Otis Powell!
Weird whispers cross datelines
Fine lines of immortal volition
A history of where the blues were born
Whirlwinds that bound de man up
Chain de man down
Willie wiggles then he falls
Willie wobbles and falls regular as daylight
Like pain of uncured sickness
Like blowing - relentless winds
Wild whistles of whiskey wills
Tell secrets that cloak resolutions
Eerie echoes bounce off brick brain blockades
Wander in subconscious valleys
Like demons in deep sleep
Holding healing at bay fencing the body off
Form soul and from voices of angels
It is a commencement of wills at war
A burden for friends - foes
Loved ones / enemies
It’s a yoke that dominates identity
And distorts the smells in the air
Wishes from other’s worlds well-up inside
There is little isolation from weathered want
It’s piped in like air conditioning
It creeps like a thick fog hiding all but itself
The self is warped
Watered down
Withered
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<Deleted User> (9821)
Sat 29th Oct 2011 10:21
wow noetic-fret, ....(000oooo).
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Thank you Noetic-fret, I surpass myseld at denial :o)
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Good to see you back Michael with some thought provoking poetry, you read them really well. Do you still have the Harlequin, I would love to hear it again if you wouldn't mind reposting it? Thanks, Lynn xx
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Sat 15th Oct 2011 12:43
Hi there Noetic-fret!, welcome to WOL. Winston
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winston plowes
Mon 23rd Jan 2012 23:13
Hi Mike, Thx for looking at my space stuff... you are right it is a massive awe inspiring subject. Images of Earth is a found poem however, All the lines in it were found in
'The Home Planet (Images and Reflections of Earth from Space Explorers)'. Kevin W.Kelley. Macdonald Queen Anne Press 1988. I was interested to see how comments from these astronauts expressed themselves in this book and how these experiences might alter their religion and philosophy. Whether this explores that idea or not I don't know but I do like these exercises. Truth is that this thing is so big, how can anyone do it justice in words? Win
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