Just saying hello and hope you are well - and I miss you on here! xxxx

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Thanks Isobel for your kind comments on "Flesh", glad you like the re-write. To be honest, I wondered about the 6th stanza myself, and couldn't decide whether to keep it in or not. It's always true people will think differently but I value your opinion, thanks again. xx

Comment is about Isobel (poet profile)

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Hi Jeff,
Thank you for your kind comments on "Flesh".
Just been reading your samples and latest blogs, all good stuff, especially like "Glastonbury - no more". Cheers, Lynn x

Comment is about Jeffarama! (poet profile)

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Hi Ann, thanks for comments on "Flesh". I often do put in the odd humorous comment, so the "too hot to handle" line was intentional, but if any of the rest sounded comical then it wasn't intended! I shall post a free verse version as well.
Lol, love your comment on him being a language teacher! My REAL guy is the one who started to snore in "Warm Embrace", so this guy could be anything really, though I did say French AFTER A FASHION! Lol, Lynn xx

Comment is about Ann Foxglove (poet profile)

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Ann. Ta for your comments on Anything Goes. It's one of my Leonard Cohen impressions.

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Hope things have improved since May 18th Crackling - it must have been very traumatic for you!

Comment is about Crackling (poet profile)

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Hi Lynn - I just saw Isobel's comment on Flesh and your reply to her about rhyming etc. Funnily enough, you said that rhyming works better in an amusing poem. I think that with Flesh, the rhyme almost made it into an amusing poem, which was probably not what you intended! It would be interesting to see a second version in free verse and compare. x

Comment is about Lynn Dye (poet profile)

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Yep - I hear what you are saying. I often start of a poem in free verse and then whittle away at it until it near as damn it rhymes - it must be the musician in us... or old habits dying hard LOL x

Comment is about Lynn Dye (poet profile)

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Hi Isobel, thank you for commenting on "Flesh". Before I joined WOL I had only ever written rhyming poetry, but I have recently dabbled with free verse - in "Arillas" and "Warm Embrace" for instance, yet sometimes I have to actually change verses because they ended up rhyming anyway!! I actually think rhyming works better with comical poems, but free verse is probably better with the romantic. Thanks for advice anyway, always welcome, and I shall give it more of a try. xx

Comment is about Isobel (poet profile)

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Gremlins Gorn or sleeping Winston.

Comment is about Crackling (poet profile)

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Not even Country Life?

Comment is about Crackling (poet profile)

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Welcome Crackling to WOL. Here's hoping that we are all sorted now. apologies for any gremlins , winston(Admin)

Comment is about Crackling (poet profile)

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Welcome to WOL Naomi. I often get mistaken for a footballer's WAG too. I think it has something to do with my neck...
We are very lucky to look like our profile pictures - very many people don't...

Comment is about Naomi Hefter (poet profile)

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Hi Naomi, really sorry for the delay in posting but Welcome to WOL and I hope you enjoy the site. You can always enter your poems as blogs which often generates more comments :-) Win

Comment is about Naomi Hefter (poet profile)

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Soon I hope, Banksy. Been living it up at Glastonbury and such. should be back in the swing shortly!

As for the cat - simple is more than often the best

Comment is about Nash (poet profile)

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Hello to the Mighty Nash !
"only a cat" = a very simple poem, but glad you liked it. When are we seeing some more of yours ? B

Comment is about Nash (poet profile)

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Hi Ann - thanks for your kind comments on 'Excess memories :) As you say it probably isn't a typical example, though I do tend to go with the mood of the moment.

Best wishes, Dave

Comment is about Ann Foxglove (poet profile)

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Hi Dave - hope you are well. I'm so pleased that Win chose your poem as the poem of the month. I must admit I hadn't heard it before, seems very different to recent poems of yours. I like it, and also your other lighter stuff too. So well done! xx

Comment is about Dave Dunn (poet profile)

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I always find your poems interesting and with a lot of thought behind them. I see from re-reading your profile that you look forward to criticism/comment etc. I don't know how often you make comments on other poets poems - if you do, you are more likely to get feedback from them. Good luck with it all anywaY! XX

Comment is about Tom (poet profile)

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Thanks for kind comments on "Curled as a shell . . ." x

Comment is about Lynn Dye (poet profile)

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Thanks for kind comments on "Curled as a shell . . ." x

Comment is about Marianne Daniels (poet profile)

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Now there's handsome!
Jx

Comment is about Malpoet (poet profile)

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Well I can only apologise for having misunderstood your poem, and for completely missing the re-cycling tray - all is clear now.
And as for the picture - I have seen some very pleasant ones of you ... and if you're going to have one that makes you look like something barking - perhaps Pekinese is not your best look? ... get yourself a brandy and you'll look a lot more saintly, Bernard!
:)
Jx

Comment is about Malpoet (poet profile)

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Hello Jack thank you for your kind comments , i also have a monthly poetry column at www.pennyblackmusic.co.uk .
John is a really nice man , if you ever get to meet him you will have a great time, he is very down to earth and a lovable rogue. I have just wrote an article on him inc an interview. You can find it on pennyblack or next month I think it is going up on this site.
If you get to met Johnny you will have a good time he is really interesting and funny, say hello from me and tell him I will catch him again soon. Oh I nearly forgot as with everyones heros you do get nervous when you are with them but with John he makes you at ease and you soon feel as though you have been pals for years so dont worry, if you ever get the chance to meet him take it , you will never forget it.

Comment is about Jack Pascoe (poet profile)

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Thank you all for your wonderful comments.

"Ian Dury meets Elvis"! Wow complements indeed...Do you mind if we quote that? ;-)

The music has been carefully constructed to complement the words so that, hopefully, the whole package is more than the sum of the parts. Glad you liked it and thanks for the welcome.

Comment is about The Antipoet (poet profile)

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Welcome Jack. Interesting poems especially enjoyed
"Where have all the rock stars gone?"
.

Comment is about Jack Pascoe (poet profile)

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Hi Ann - but you're barely out of your teens yet !
(crimplene & tweed)

Comment is about Ann Foxglove (poet profile)

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Welcome to WOl. great stuff! enjoy exploring the site. nice audio sample. winston

you can put more audio on blog entries of course. You don't necesarily have to put the words up.

Comment is about The Antipoet (poet profile)

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Hello, welcome to WOL. Liked your audio and the poem too. (Audio reminded me a bit of Edgar Broughtan - before your time I expect!)

Comment is about Adam Gregory Pergament (poet profile)

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Hey! Liked the audio - Ian Dury meets Elvis on first hearing! Welcome to WOL. x

Comment is about The Antipoet (poet profile)

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Hi Cyn - "crimplene & tweed" - you are so kind to me & my poems - I don't know what I've done to deserve it, since many of them are just daft throwaway ideas. I remember commenting on yours about "what women want" type of theme a while ago which was really good, but sometimes it doesn't seem fair that one or two poets just seem to "ring our bell" & yet others ignore them. Ah well different strokes & all that !
all the best. B

Comment is about Cynthia Buell Thomas (poet profile)

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Hi John, thanks very much for your comment on my profile - I was chuffed! Will be blogging more soon. Love 'Our Gert' and look forward to reading more. Dianna.

Comment is about John Coopey (poet profile)

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Hi there, just listened to your audio. I like the fact that the acoustics don't override the words which does seem to occur with a lot of this particular style of performance poetry.

I love your take on Moses. Very funny. Great stuff :-)

Comment is about The Antipoet (poet profile)

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Hi Mal, thank you very much for your comment on 'Tiptoe through the tulips.'
Very much appreciated,
Janet.x

Comment is about Malpoet (poet profile)

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Welcome to our not so little site Cathy, hope you enjoy reading and finding all the little gems on here. Winston

Comment is about Cathy Bryant (poet profile)

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ah no im sorry you felt like that. i love your enthusiasm and spirit, i once felt like that...my mind, jet streaming always but particularly that night. i had personal stuff going on, nothing to do with company.thanks for your concern x

Comment is about Cynthia Buell Thomas (poet profile)

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Thank you Larisa (Falling in Love by Surprise) for your kind comments! x

Comment is about Larisa Rzhepishevska (poet profile)

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Ta John (Falling in Love by Surprise) for your kind comments! x

Comment is about John Coopey (poet profile)

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Thank you for your comment, my dear friend.

Comment is about Lynn Dye (poet profile)

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Your welcome, I love the first line, though not sure why you are in the wardrobe! Is that where men do these things?

Comment is about John Togher (poet profile)

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Thank you for your comments, Val, on 'How To Fix A Broken Man'. Don't you listen too much to that Mr Thomas! (Although he can be very insightful...)

Comment is about Valerie Cook (poet profile)

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Hello Ann,
Cheers for reading and commenting on 'How To Fix A Broken Man'. I've replied in the comments section of the poem, but I'll also tell you here - the 'marine on the beach' line was something Darren wrote himself in the comments under the poem, I haven't edited the poem since first putting it up and that line was never in the poem. He's a sneaky one that Mr Thomas.

Glad you enjoyed it! Even if you read lines that were never there! x

Comment is about Ann Foxglove (poet profile)

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Hi Andy and thanks for taking the time to read Crixus story, much appreciated x

Comment is about Andy N (poet profile)

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Thank you Ann for reading my latest, i know it's quite a task lol You were right about the missing word - i hadn't seen it despite several read throughs lol

Comment is about Ann Foxglove (poet profile)

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Thanks for the post Dave, I am an unpolished writer! sorry if I came across obnoxious, more insecure really! Thanks for encouragement, take care.

Comment is about Dave Bradley (poet profile)

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Cheers Dave, for commenting on Carol Ann Duffy. As you say, one of those moments! I was very interested in your recent discussion thread about looking for more offbeat subjects, and will do my best! Greg

Comment is about Dave Bradley (poet profile)

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Hi Andy - thanks for your comments on 'Dolphins Of The Cove', they are much appreciated :)

Best wishes, Dave

Comment is about Andy N (poet profile)

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Its nice to read your work once again!

Comment is about sian howell (poet profile)

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I like the way your poetry rhymes...

Comment is about Lisa Milligan (poet profile)

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To "vomit over paper phonetically" is a new twist on writers writing!!!

Comment is about Marianne Daniels (poet profile)

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