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Alex Kat Para

Mon 19th Aug 2019 13:04

Haha. Thank you all for the comments! It's crazy how someone can still be such a big part of your life even when you no longer see them anymore (in my case, this is because of geographical distance). Even if your conscious mind works to move on, you might still dream of them regularly because your subconscious finds it harder to let go - these are the feelings which my poem stems from

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Adam Rabinowitz

Thu 15th Aug 2019 14:53

I like the idea of dream habitation...seems like a lot can 've done with that concept. What you have done is lovely and sad and sweet. Thank you for reading my poem Pronoun. I hope you have a chance to read a few more. In A House with Feathers it us the house which is dreaming...would love to know what you thought.

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Ghazala Lari

Thu 15th Aug 2019 11:29

extremely sensitive write. lovingly expressed.

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Don Matthews

Thu 15th Aug 2019 11:11

I think someone's playing around here Alexandra. Ignore them.....?

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Don Matthews

Thu 15th Aug 2019 11:08

Is it cleva or cleaver? Dunno. Mind you, I could be way off track....?

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Raj Ferds

Thu 15th Aug 2019 11:01

Ooops...I meant 'clever title'.

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Raj Ferds

Thu 15th Aug 2019 11:00

Clver tile Alex. And then it unfolds in a gentle, romantic song.
Is it real? Or is it a fantasy?

Keep going.
Raj

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Raj Ferds

Thu 15th Aug 2019 11:00

Clver tile Alex. And then it unfolds in a gentle, romantic song.
Is it real? Or is it a fantasy?

Keep going.
Raj

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