Four sylls says it
Seven syllables, oh shit
No allow rhyme it

You're right. Bloody difficult ?

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That's it Don. But the difficult bit is no deliberate rhyming ? Condensation is the name of the game.
Go on, I know you've got it in you!
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Four syllables
Seven syllables that's all
Am I getting there?

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Thanks Lisa, Devon. Delayed response due to events and happenings. Have managed at last to complete my haibun trilogy. Yes Devon haibuns are more than the sum of their parts. A rich seam for the mining of.
Go well
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It's Haibun time! Well done. What I find remarkable about this form is that it displays what is contained within the Haiku - which are often given short shrift by western readers who think it is merely the syllable count and line breaks that make a quality Haiku.

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