Thank you Devon, Trevor, Ray, and Jemima. Your encouragement means a lot. Looking forward to reading your works.
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Fri 2nd Aug 2019 13:37
Beautiful and so very much worthy of being considered as the poem of the week. Thank you.Jemima.
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I like the implication of natural joy that comes with circular and spiral movements so reminiscent of nature itself, and you have captured it so well. I am not a fan of formal dance preening but this is something entirely different!
Ray
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I like the realms in which this poem operates - the organic nature of dance is conveyed very well. Trevor
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Devon Brock
Fri 2nd Aug 2019 11:03
Adam - "spirograph"! Such a glorious toy. To me, this whole poem centers, pivots, and dances on it.
D
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Mae Foreman
Sat 3rd Aug 2019 10:43
It has an entrancing ritualistic quality that gets you in the zone, with that circular movement... Great work Adam! Now that would sound awesome in audio! I look forward to hear your recital! Perhaps accompanied by a rhythmic simple drum, like bongos!
Excellent ?
Mae
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