I love this Raymond - and what a great ending!
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Liked this Raymond! Didn't expect the twisty bit at the end! Haha!
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Rachel, Robert and Val. Thank you so much. x
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I loved this. The images felt so right. beautifully observed and I got a distinct warmth from it. Lovely.
rachel
x
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Thu 25th Feb 2010 14:41
This is nice.... little Jamaican Icarus
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I enjoyed reading your poem Raymond. Good imagery,I can see his face as he bites into the fruit. Lovely.
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Raymond Antrobus
Fri 12th Mar 2010 16:59
aw. Thanks Chris, Jon and ISO! :-) x
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