Your title is apt. Mine also has been a rollercoaster ride but with the help of many my rollercoaster has now slowed and I'm enjoying the ride. It sounds like yours is still 'out of control' which is not good.
Extreme oscillations are not good. We don't want thoughts of suicide creeping in.
On the poetic side,I like your imagery and the rhyming works well. The last exclamation 'full stop' I really like ?
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It's almost is in the shape of an exclamation mark! That has me so easily amused right now hahaha ?
My brain fart slightly resembles something, woop
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HayzTee (Hayley)
Thu 23rd Aug 2018 00:35
I am okay with the roller coaster it creates for now don't you worry. I just hope it slows down soon! ?
I wanted to use imagery to properly try to emphasise on aspects. I think mental health can be scary, but it can also be okay to. Currently had half an idea for poem about the pro's, after a beneficial mood swing earlier that resulted in me being very productive ?
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