I really like tis, all about passion, yet you sound such a gentleman in that last line!
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I really like tis, all about passion, yet you sound such a gentleman in that last line!
Comment is about Lay Down Your Guard (blog)
Original item by Tom
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Cynthia Buell Thomas
Tue 15th Dec 2009 18:30
I also think this is good. The last verse says it all, clearly and honestly. Who could resist?
I found a little insecurity in the pronouns - as in what exactly was/were the referents in the first verse.
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