Really excellent Ian. It has a long view and a gentle warmth to it - an allegory of the death of a close one I should say. Highly affecting stuff. Very distinctively written.
Ray
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Thu 22nd Feb 2018 16:25
Ian,
Thank you for this poem which will speak to many but in different ways. It has a mystical quality which gives hope in a gentle but clear way.
Keith
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Martin Elder
Thu 22nd Feb 2018 22:48
I think Keith is right in that it has an almost mystical quality about it. Wonderfully put as usual Ian.
Love it
I am intrigued to know where the accompanying picture is of.
Nice one mate
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