Nicely written Gabrielle, suitably brief.
The last line seems out of place to me
and hard to understand compared to the rest.
Well done!
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Nicely written Gabrielle, suitably brief.
The last line seems out of place to me
and hard to understand compared to the rest.
Well done!
Comment is about Unspoken (blog)
Original item by Gabrielle Renee'
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Gabrielle Renee'
Tue 19th Dec 2017 18:54
Thank you Graham. I thought about adding another stanza that would add more clarity but the words just wouldn’t flow for me
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