<Deleted User> (18474)
Wed 6th Dec 2017 06:38
This is a new kind of read for me. I'm new in to poetry. I really like this. Really, really liked it. It's got a real rhythm and music to it. Real attitude too. I need to read it some more. Might get back to you with some more comments later. Thanks very much Jarvis. Beno.
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Big Sal
Wed 6th Dec 2017 05:14
Keep it up man, and thanks for the feedback, always appreciated. If you haven't already, you should consider compiling your stuff into an anthology.
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suki spangles
Thu 7th Dec 2017 05:24
Yes,
Looking forward to the old solar return of our dark twin. Time to reacquaint ourselves with Annunaki poetry and the like.
I'll get my coat.
Suki
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