I like the turn and use of words with this, but can't help feeling there should be more. or maybe that is your intention to eave the reader wanting more. Just a thought.
But I like it none the less.
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Martin Elder
Sun 22nd Oct 2017 18:05
I like the turn and use of words with this, but can't help feeling there should be more. or maybe that is your intention to eave the reader wanting more. Just a thought.
But I like it none the less.
Comment is about Poem in Progress E (blog)
Original item by MyDystopiA