thanks both. much appreciated

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Original item by Becky Sowray

Wow. That got me Becky. Your words paint a lot of pictures in my mind. Pretty sensual.

There is a message hiding in there that I can't find.
(I have no intention of looking for it).

Well done.
Raj

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Original item by Becky Sowray

Ooo I'd just logged out and had to log back in again when I saw this. Such intricate wordplay here Becky, and some beautiful sonics and imagery, with a double dose of ambiguity. The first two stanzas are outstanding.

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Original item by Becky Sowray