Every now and again, you pull a poem out of your bag that hits me with a big hammer. This is one of them. The choice of language here, the selected words and how you've structured the lines, all go towards creating a tangible atmosphere that completely conveys feelings, sensations, and place.
Marvellous. That first verse makes me want to say it out loud.
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Laura Taylor
Wed 21st Dec 2016 12:52
Every now and again, you pull a poem out of your bag that hits me with a big hammer. This is one of them. The choice of language here, the selected words and how you've structured the lines, all go towards creating a tangible atmosphere that completely conveys feelings, sensations, and place.
Marvellous. That first verse makes me want to say it out loud.
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Original item by Ian Whiteley