Michelle - not bad for starters! Being the pedant that I am: 5th line should be slowly rather than slowing I think. I look forward to reading more.
Rob
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Robert Mann
Mon 6th Jun 2016 17:47
Michelle - not bad for starters! Being the pedant that I am: 5th line should be slowly rather than slowing I think. I look forward to reading more.
Rob
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Original item by Michelle Cote