Stu - thank you! And yes I agree I have amended it - I'm glad you like it! And Rob alas no new love - just a wish!!

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Hello Vicki
to my mind this is the best thing you have written. its succinct, hopeful and a little bit lovely.
It also flows beautifully, except (my opinion only) the 'our' in the last line.
'Love unbarred' would be just as acceptable and flow better. but thats only how im reading it.

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Vicki - new love? Not your usual message this one. Good luck!
Rob

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