Thank you both - I appreciate your comments!
Martin I'm pleased you were able to feel all that - my job is done! And Tommy ...... to fathom is indeed to live - I'm glad you liked it! X

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This I like. To fathom is to live, and this shakes a finger at the likes of me; stood watching this event is akin to the being, the ridiculous posture that we assume.
Such eyes as yours should be shaded. Tommy

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Fabulous Vicki, I can feel the throbbing beat, the sweat, the intensity of the moment. Great poem

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