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raypool

Tue 29th Dec 2015 18:48

Thanks Stu, hard sort of poem to get right - your approbation makes a difference to my confidence! Am I really this cynical?

David, a full blooded and compassionate comment as always and an affirmation for my efforts. I do feel a bit flat and have had a nasty virus, so I sweated over this literally! All it needed would be Rolf Harris in a reindeer suit and a sugar rush. By the way I am a sad bastard.

Ray x

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Stu Buck

Tue 29th Dec 2015 16:23

this is great ray. the first two lines stand alone for me, extremely funny.

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