I like this -I like your work, period. Perhaps I am unnecessarily confused ... but ... is this a play on 'There's an elephant in the room?' Or is that so obvious my question is ridiculous?
A really good conclusion; thought-provoking. Otherwise - maybe fewer words would make a stronger impact.
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John Bastard
Wed 23rd Dec 2015 13:21
The gravity of the final line suits me best
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