Am glad you liked the lines. (except the 3rd one.)
You describe them well. Thanks for that.
Keep writing. Take care.
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No need to apologize! Those lines are beautiful.
"Flawless like moonlight" could mean the purity of the color of the rose. "Showered by rain" also describes the process of a flower growing (how a rose is born). Is this what you were thinking? I'm very happy my poem inspired another work!
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These lines just popped in my mind immediately after i read your lines.
Apologies in advance, that I wrote them without your consent.
Please let me know if you like them?
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flawless like moonlight
showered by rain
miraculously no thorn
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ali bell
Thu 23rd Jul 2015 07:30
I liked all the lines! Thanks :)
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