Thanks very much for this useful feedback Harry. Much appreciated.

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David,

An excellent title and very effective mood-setter which leads up to kind of drawing felt attraction.

The middle stanza is a really original way of describing a certain kind of weather (which suits the mood of the whole piece)

A (very tiny) quibble might be that the `burst`in stanza one doesn`t suit the mood of the rest of it.

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Thanks very much Cynthia.

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And it must be well-worth following up. This poem is just terrific - such a mood so cleverly created. Good to have you on WOL again.

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