Nice as it is a bit elusive... and I like that she alludes to the fact that not everything is what it seems...
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John... This right up my street ...love the very pants off it... superbo!
Gus
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Fantastic, it is short yet descriptive in so many ways, and the end, a poingnancy that is subtle yet clear and bright. Nice one John.
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The 1st stanza getts your attension and the last leavesyou with a message. complete
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Strange and interesting this one John, liked it. 1st stanza especially. Didn't expect the end either. A compact poem this. Win
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Steve Regan
Wed 13th May 2009 18:24
Strange, spare, unnerving, theologically creative. I like this a lot.
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