Thank you for your kind and helpful words!
This is a piece i'm not entirey happy with. I feel I need another word for shame in the fourth stanza (or maybe just to take the stanza out completely?) and agree totally that it needs to be pruned and structured in some other way. If anyone has any ideas please chuck them my way, i'll get working on it!

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agree with the thoughts already said here, fae and while possibly a bit wordy for my tastes, doesn't hide the fact that you defo have a talent for this.

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agree with the thoughts already said here, fae and while possibly a bit wordy for my tastes, doesn't hide the fact that you defo have a talent for this.

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Thanks Andy I completely agree! Unfortunately I don't think i'd ever get the point where i'd be comfortable to perform what I write and so luckily I have no intention of reading this aloud. But thank you for your comments they really are appreciated.

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do really like this, fae.

it's perhaps a bit heavy (use of language not topic) to be performed, but it doesn't mean i didn't like it. i think it's excellent.

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