Good to hear back from you, Josh. I really like the comments under your profile, because I totally agree with them.
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The intent of these words is excellent, clear and rich. The directing of these ideas with so much punctuation is awkward. I do think you have three basic sentences. Let them breathe. IMO, if in doubt, leave out.
Also, IMO, pick 'dampening' or 'despondency'. Me, I like 'despondency' with 'dampening' inherent in its effect, and it sounds better in this context. :) I'm really not bossy, just interested.
It's really great to see you on-line again. I hope you are well, and happy.
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<Deleted User> (6895)
Wed 10th Sep 2014 13:03
long time,no read!tis indeed good to see you back Josh.Love this poem.xx
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