Actually, I think this work covers a lot of ground about the all-pervasive 'crime' of bullying, a topic at last taken very seriously. IMO,the poem needs reducing to be more impactive, half as long and twice as effective. But the choice: to kill, or be killed, or to kill oneself is strongly presented. A very current subject, Anthony, and kudos to you for tackling it.
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Cynthia Buell Thomas
Mon 25th Aug 2014 16:33
Actually, I think this work covers a lot of ground about the all-pervasive 'crime' of bullying, a topic at last taken very seriously. IMO,the poem needs reducing to be more impactive, half as long and twice as effective. But the choice: to kill, or be killed, or to kill oneself is strongly presented. A very current subject, Anthony, and kudos to you for tackling it.
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