Echoes: ‘a glorious anthology… bursting with delightful poems’ Buy now. Limited stocks.

Profile image

Ged the Poet

Sat 23rd Aug 2014 14:57

The picture immediately draws you in to the title Armistice (Gods of war)... spot on!
'The ink upon this document
dries twice as fast as blood
that seeps into this continent
and mixes with the mud'...

Great work Ian.

Comment is about Armistice (Gods Of War) (blog)

Original item by Ian Whiteley

Profile image

alan barlow

Tue 19th Aug 2014 22:53

i love this and think the picture accompanies the piece beautifully a very evocative piece, thankyou for creating it

Comment is about Armistice (Gods Of War) (blog)

Original item by Ian Whiteley

Profile image

Starfish

Mon 11th Aug 2014 22:34

An accomplished piece of writing. Great use of rhyme and language.

Comment is about Armistice (Gods Of War) (blog)

Original item by Ian Whiteley

Profile image

tommyfazz@yahoo.com

Sun 10th Aug 2014 16:48

Ian Hi, It strikes me as having a total lack of cynicism (skeptical yes, in parts and that's no bad thing at all) - which coming from your stand point is damn hard to do. Tommy

ps I'm surprised there are not a lot more posts for this work Ian :/ tc

Comment is about Armistice (Gods Of War) (blog)

Original item by Ian Whiteley

This site uses only functional cookies that are essential to the operation of the site. We do not use cookies related to advertising or tracking. By continuing to browse, you are agreeing to our use of cookies.

Find out more Hide this message